Polonium's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Finger]

this is the best advice I could possbily give you:

'hai' is a really retarded thing to write, don't do that ever again

oh also don't add a frivolous number of sketchy-looking crease lines to features like the ears and chin when drawing in an otherwise simple format, it looks pretty silly to contrast your style in that way so just use as little lines as practically possible on art like this

ALSO ALSO don't use diagonal lines to represent shaded areas as well as actual solid colors, that looks all messy and confusing so just pick one style and stick to it throughout

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thies responds:

Okay? :p.. I find it quite funny that he says hai, just because it's so retarted. Yeah you're right about the line shading, it didn't come out very well.

Thanks for the review.

[Omniverse Reverie]

it reminds me very much of

magnified plankton which is pretty neat

gleegleep responds:

Yeah, magnified plankton's pretty cool. Thanks! :D :D