Polonium's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Restless]

hilarious

your satire on bad poetry is amazing

pupart responds:

This is not a satire! This is me, writing what i feel...

[Dr. Strangelove]

there is no way

he'd be able to smoke with the gloved hand, not at this point

[Umbrella Girl]

wha

The problem I have (written that too many times now) with this image is that although you have put admirable effort into the detail and texture of the drawing (especially the hair), the actual underlying basic line-art doesn't seem to quite sit right in my mind - for example, the jawline to me seems to be far too wide and really very masculine, and the eye sockets and recesses seem a little oddly shaped and it makes me feel sort of confused if I look for too long.

Maybe you're bang on the money and I just have some underlying issues with the facial anatomy of Asian people, but either way my opinion stems from my interpretation, and there it is.

daryl2158 responds:

Thanks for the comment!

Well, it is a pretty odd angle to look at a face from, and I might have missed out a few visual cues to indicate the head's position, like shadows in some places. I think that's why it might look odd, though I'm pretty confident about the anatomy.

Can't really pinpoint what they are right now though. Looked through some reference photos online too, can't find any major differences between Asian and Caucasian jawlines, but of course, Asian eyes are much different.

A much reduced brow bone, smaller eyes, flatter faces, an epicanthic fold, and flatter, less pointed noses are some of the differences Asians have.

[Splitting]

I am a sucker

for the manipulation of art like this, but this is relatively simple and I think if you played around with more significant and interesting looking effects you could learn a lot from it aesthetically

[Her Favourite place]

the physical logistics

of this scene's location in time and space are blowing my mind, but I'm not going to say it isn't a pretty well done piece of art just for that

the style and subject [naked mutant furries] isn't exactly what's up my street in terms of what I enjoy in art, but I'll definitely say that it's technically impressive, and the blue color scheme is very easy on the eye

also I am additionally impressed that you pulled off a very passable illustration of a galaxy (one of the most deceptively difficult things to draw ever, in my opinion), although the central high-activity region seems to have the shape texture of a huge blob of whipped cream

just so I don't have to start writing any full stops, here's a new line just to end this review; zzzzzxxxxxcccccc